tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6297631190403710992.post7140143804340315993..comments2024-03-27T14:34:57.325-04:00Comments on Through a Glass, Darkly: Greenfield Civil Wars: Chapter FifteenM.K.http://www.blogger.com/profile/09205619221345704689noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6297631190403710992.post-20619054171124315192013-05-29T18:09:33.037-04:002013-05-29T18:09:33.037-04:00I don't mind if they're there...I don't mind if they're there... Tanya Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07303740704566793062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6297631190403710992.post-13832018717119411372013-05-29T11:47:33.073-04:002013-05-29T11:47:33.073-04:00Yes, it's supposed to be "to dim" --...Yes, it's supposed to be "to dim" -- as in, when she hears the bad news, the light seems to go out of her life for. Life becomes darker. Tanya, thank you VERY MUCH for all this great work!! I'll try to delete your editing comments, as you ask ... but honestly, they are kind of part of the book's history, part of its record. They don't bother me, if they don't bother you. Do you mind terribly if I leave them?M.K.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09205619221345704689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6297631190403710992.post-80679576183183944212013-05-29T10:50:53.979-04:002013-05-29T10:50:53.979-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Carolynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09809934306862670081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6297631190403710992.post-81530683191449247332013-05-29T07:53:46.252-04:002013-05-29T07:53:46.252-04:00The paragraph that starts:
"Emilia felt a dif...The paragraph that starts:<br />"Emilia felt a different knot tighten in her stomach, and the room seemed to dim."<br /><br />Should it be "too dim."? <br /><br />Was the room dimming at the moment or was she suddenly aware of the lack of light in the room?Tanya Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07303740704566793062noreply@blogger.com